HORTATORY EXPOSITION
Corruption
Thesis:
Do you know what the meaning of corruption is? What is the
relation between money and corruption? Well, corruption is common everywhere in
the world, even in the United States. It’s just a matter of intensity. However,
it is quite shocking when one reliable survey claims Jakarta as the most
corrupt place in Indonesia.
Argument 1:
The survey has made me sad, actually, because I stay and
earn a living here in the capital. As most people know, Tanjung Priok port
smuggling is not a new thing at all. Entrepreneurs who want to minimize their
tax payments tend to do such a thing more often. They even bribe the officials.
Argument
2:
Well, I think the measures taken so far to overcome the
problem by punishing the corruptors is still not far enough. We have to prevent
the younger generations from getting a bad mentality caused by corruption.
Recommendation:
I believe we should start at the earliest stages in school
and I think everyone should be involved in the effort to eradicate corruption.
We must not make any distinction.
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